Pretty much good work here , Can't really day much since it's the beginning of the book ,but I would advise you to update more chapters ☺️great work though keep it up and never stop writing.
Sao_Kai
Liked it!
SUKANo need to,I loved your work though, Don't forget to add my book to your library and review lol thanks in advance.
Sao_Kai:Thanks, I'll keep at it 👍