Review Detail of Ajame_649 in Rise Of The System Holder

Item: Rise Of The System Holder
Rating: 5

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Ajame_649Lv32yrAjame_649

well quite good plot line though quite cliche , I think making the story more immersive and detailing the character's and event would make the novel better

Rise Of The System Holder

Yoroshee

Disukai oleh 2 orang

SUKA

Balasan1

YorosheePenulisYoroshee

Thank you so much for your constructive opinion! I will keep your words in mind and try to fix the story's shortcomings in the future chapters. I look forward to your future opinions!

2yr