Review Detail of StrangeJelly in GINKEN: Sea Storm

I'll likely end up being quite shameless. Despite a slight improvement, I should nevertheless point out that my writing is far from faultless. I've been working to make the book better, especially this one while keeping the book's "multiverse" theme going. While maintaining some of the details and characters from the original GINKEN, this is thought of as a separate work. The way the original plot developed wasn't to my liking, and the books I was making in the background were taking up unnecessary room in the library. To fix that, I've made a new account, which is the one you're currently viewing. Anyway, I look forward to reading all of your comments and I hope this book finds a home. Many thanks to all who support it!