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my prognosis is to leave this novel alone, the synopsis is a straight up lie and the storytelling is bland and forced. the content to him getting his power up is skipped, his first loss is skipped. the storytelling principle of show dont tell is simply ignored. small spoiler-> rough plot direction the female lead is shoved to the mcs arms almost instantly, without any real content except her having a system which forces her to give herself to him against her own will. this seems like a not so much thought out power fantasy. i do have to say that the synopsis really sounded exciting, so this is a huge disappointment...

I Receive Directions To Become The Supreme Demon In My Sister's Novel

Younger Sister

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