Review Detail of Kenrio in Code Geass FF
Ulasan detail
this fic is well written but you can clearly see that without stated writing this fic without doing research about code grass by how many mistake about the plot you can find. another thing that make this a extremely unpleasant read is that the mc is a slave to the canon story so even when he have the chance to create a business empire that can control the world he dont don't do anything significant simple because of the fear of changing the future,these type of fic are the worst
Code Geass FF
soldklad
Disukai oleh 42 orang
SUKABalasan4
hey, most of those things that aren't the same as code Geass history are intentionally made and also the goals and personality of the mc is set like that for the plot I planned and because I am a newbie, I needed the canon as guide so that I don't run headless. Also, if I wanted to make an original plot from the start then I would have just made an original story.
It sounds like you don't have any idea for what you want your MC to accomplish in verse. Is this the case? I've been looking through your reviews and your responses seem really wishy washy. Almost like you don't like your MC and you don't want him to do anything.
soldklad:hey, most of those things that aren't the same as code Geass history are intentionally made and also the goals and personality of the mc is set like that for the plot I planned and because I am a newbie, I needed the canon as guide so that I don't run headless. Also, if I wanted to make an original plot from the start then I would have just made an original story.
I do have something for the mc to do specifically, it's just that I don't want to rush it because the story will be kind of a 'rush work' if I do so. You know, when I started writing this, I only thought about what I want the mc to do then as I continued, I saw that I have to mix up something more like character building, other 'characters' with personality and such things. I wanted to make the best story I can after all.
JManM:It sounds like you don't have any idea for what you want your MC to accomplish in verse. Is this the case? I've been looking through your reviews and your responses seem really wishy washy. Almost like you don't like your MC and you don't want him to do anything.
Making a fanfic following the original story (canon plot and story), is something... what's the point?
soldklad:hey, most of those things that aren't the same as code Geass history are intentionally made and also the goals and personality of the mc is set like that for the plot I planned and because I am a newbie, I needed the canon as guide so that I don't run headless. Also, if I wanted to make an original plot from the start then I would have just made an original story.