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There is still a space for the novel to grow and ensure that it's direction is well lit. You've manage to paint an appealing image for the reader as your words become descriptive the picture becomes clearer but the story development is still on the verge of being created . A novel with potential

Ninth Sunset

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thank you, i appreciate your honesty