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Off bat weak mc who finds metal ball in a library. skipping the nitpicking of how is he the only one to find it part, the ball is neat. Fuse genes to become stronger. 150 chaps in he fused multiple genes got cool abilities that evolve with him. When he fights the pangolian beasts and it described the changes on his armor it was awesome. 20 ish chaps later all that is retconned the ball is useless, the genes he fused are useless, he is talentless and just was lucky. Okay whole story tossed out now there are machine worlds and martial arts worlds. His planet is weak and he is weak. Given some bare run of the mill cultivating guide thats only strong on his planet but commonly used elsewhere. Whats supposed to be interesting now? talentless, boring mc with no special abilities or anything. world is all over the place and no information lasts more than a chapter without being uno reversed. Im fully caught up to chapter 290 and its not worth it at all anymore. Amazing concept even if used before in other stories but scrapped for some boring crap.

Permanent Martial Arts

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