Review Detail of Islam_Muratov in Night dragon Emperor in DXD

for lovers.nothing more than for amateurs. fanfic gives hope but only on the surface. the author simply collected all the existing clichés. If you have read a lot of this type of fanfiction, then you will only be disappointed. But if you're just getting started, then I think it's not so bad. My advice to the author is to rewrite chapter 2 without Japanese words much better (Japanese words only make it worse just imagine that you are having a conversation with someone and he starts talking mixing languages ​​\u200b\u200bthis is very unpleasant) I also advise you to reconsider the system it really does not fit this fanfic or rewrite the beginning, (let the guy be 16-18)