Review Detail of Venerable_Far in Child of Infinity in Omniverse

Writing Quality: 2 stars - Authors Writing is really bad, his grammar is not too good either. (I'm not trying to put you down or anything but its just not good). Story Development: 1 star - Mc gets mad op powers which even a fool could become strong with, there is no reason to relate to the mc, hardly any character development. Character design: 1 star - As mentioned above there is no character development. Mc feels bland and is a flat character. Stability of updates: 3 star World background (its a fan fic so author didn't make the world) - 4 star. - Now the parts of the world the author did make like the power system and such are actually quite good but the grammar and op powers from the start ruin the novel