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Review Detail of DaoBrother in Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!

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This novel becomes really repetitive as it progress specially in the grand line arc, story progression is really bad the author keeps on milking the reaction of characters on the story the MC is telling you can have a filler arc last for more than a month (actually time) because the author keeps on writing 300 to 500 word chapter that only contains the reaction of the world’s audience the story makes little progress. This is bad it was great in the beginning but went down hill when the grandline arc started

Creating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!

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