Review Detail of ImaginarySora in Retired life of Artoria Pendragon

Its a nice story concept and its not that bad of a story however I believe you could have done much better. You should have researched more about the other characters since there are many inconsistencies. Firstly Merlin should have already been in his tower in Avalon since this should be the end of Artoria's reign. Vortigern also should have been defeated and killed considering canon Artoria was able to kill him I dont see how this OP Artoria would not be able to, I also find it hard to believe that some of the Knights of the Round would turn on Artoria there would have at least some that were loyal to her like Bedivere who if I recall was still loyal to him till his death. Lancelot also had no motive of betraying Artoria since the reason he betrayed her was because of his secret relationship with Guinevere so Artoria was forced to have her executed because if she didnt it would distabilise her reign with people having the opinion that shes weak willed, etc. Her political enemies would see that as a weakness that they could use against her. The reason Lancelot even recklessly attacked was because Guinevere would have been executed so he went and attacked which led to several deaths. Also wouldnt the rumors of her not being able to understand emotions not exist? You could have also started Artoria in the modern era like you wanted judging by your sypnosis and have the past events in like flashback in dreams if you want to be vague on what happened during her reign that way you dont need much research.