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Yehejee
YehejeeLv12yrYehejee

I liked the concept and was getting ready to read the story, however i just cant read a story/text with almost no spaces between paragraphes. I am not saying the storys is either bad or good but i am simply stating that if i am to proceed with reading it, you need to edit spaces between some sentences to give me or your future readers som air to breath. Otherwise you can also ignore this comment and move on. ( Still like the concept tho so hoping for the change ) [img=recommend]

My New Life As A Zoldyck In HxH

Maple_Tree_9863

Disukai oleh 4 orang

SUKA

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Maple_Tree_9863
Maple_Tree_9863PenulisMaple_Tree_9863

Thanks, I guess? Sorry I didn't see your comment until now.

schizocat:Wow, a webnovel author actually willing to listen to a criticism/advice. Never knew they exist until now.
Maple_Tree_9863
Maple_Tree_9863PenulisMaple_Tree_9863

Thank you for the suggestion. I’ll try my best, but I’m not used to writing like that so I might forget. I’ll try to make good-sized parapgraphs. Hopefully it will be easier to read in the future!

Yehejee
YehejeeLv1Yehejee

Awesome, thank you[img=recommend]

Maple_Tree_9863:Thank you for the suggestion. I’ll try my best, but I’m not used to writing like that so I might forget. I’ll try to make good-sized parapgraphs. Hopefully it will be easier to read in the future!
schizocat
schizocatLv2schizocat

Wow, a webnovel author actually willing to listen to a criticism/advice. Never knew they exist until now.

Maple_Tree_9863:Thank you for the suggestion. I’ll try my best, but I’m not used to writing like that so I might forget. I’ll try to make good-sized parapgraphs. Hopefully it will be easier to read in the future!