Review Detail of Avrask in GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?

Novel with the most potential I've read since Reverend Insanity. (Since I've heard that you know "Reverend Insanity") Don't get me wrong it's still lacking in comparisson, but considering that your 600 chapters are probably like 200 chapters from RI (wordcount) if not less, that's an amazing feat. By the time you've written as much as RI you'll probably have a work that will be spoken of in the same sentences as RI. That is if your writing hasn't deteriorated until then and hopefully it even improved further. As I don't think I can praise this novel anymore than I already did I can now ask the question I'm mainly leaving this review for. What's up with the present and past? (not storywise) As much as I love everything abou this novel one thing I don't get is why you jump between past and present. First I thought you simply wrote this novel in the present. While I haven't read one in the present before, the content was so good, that I continued read anyways. It gets even weirder, since your english seems to be really good. Quite a bit of more sophisticated words.. But all of a sudden you use "is, can, will" instead of "was, could, would". And then you jump back. I wrecked my brain for what reasons you would do that and I came up empty. I get why you need to use the present for something that comes from the author: "Since he isn't the main character of this story, we will call him what he likes people to call him, we will refer to him as...". Directly after you write: "Then he rose from his levitating and exquisite throne,...." (Both from CH4). While those two sound right to me the next part is the one that confuses me: "The throne is the last thing on his mind right now as he stepped down from it onto gentle ripples that appear in space..." Now that's a sentence where I totally lose it. Usually there would only be present or past. Now we got both? O_o I should add that I only used that one for entertainment purposes. Because it's pretty much what I struggle with in a nutshell. At this point I think it's also time to add that my native language is not english. So its highly possible that I just entirely missed something, that would clear up this entire thing. But I'm quite confused nevertheless. So I'd really appreciate an explanation. (Still full marks because I'm quite sure I'm at fault for misunderstanding something) Another question and something I only realized when I changed some chapters from the mix of present/past to past only for my personal collection (no worries I didn't share anything) is your use of "capital letters". I'm sure you always write Origin with a big "O", but that's where my knowledge ends. So I'm really interested in the system behind it. If i wore hats, I'd take mine off for you, but since i don't a sincere thank you for an amazing 600 chapters will have to suffice and don't force yourself. This is a masterpiece in the making. Please don't let the quality drop. I'd rather you take some time off and we don't get updates, than the quality dropping. So to another 6000 chapters and Reverend Insanity 2.0 with an actual ending.