I read the firstcomment but I didn’t let my hopes down but when I read it I was devestated. Kiba was one of my fav person he has potentia like Archer in Fate. I hate issei, you can call me jeleous and greedy but he doesn’t deserve power or women because of how he acts even he gets better later in ‘LN’. I can already see where the this fanfic heading he will ”fix” and help issei and follow him like a puppy. I can guess both issei and him will have harem and Kiba will look like a side character and will act edgy and save everyone but issei will still get the credit without doing much. I don’t know why everyone hates Rias. Half of the FanFiction MC’s act worse than her. They will get ‘spoiled’ by power they get and act arrogant, they will manipulate women to get them into harem by ‘helping’ them. I mean I‘m not fangirling Rias but she is literally a princess; sister of satan Lucifer so of course she is spoiled because she has backing. She is easy who will fall in love and loyal. I mean come on she fell for issei and doesn’t even flirt/cheat on anyone buy him while issei is perving on everyone single women. I’ll come back to check what author replies on this comment and will decide reading this or not. I feel like issei shouldn’t have any women or power he is worthless. I like the idea of your novel so far except him being a ‘bro’ to issei.

Writing Quality: This gets three stars. Simply because there are periods and commas missing in numerous places, pronouns aren't messed up and I haven't really noticed any spelling mistakes. BUT the missing quotations and the like really hinder the experience in my honest opinion. Stability of Updates: Five stars. Like I've said before, so long as someone keeps updating the book and doesn't abandon it, they get five stars in this. Story Developments: One Star. Harsh? I know but seriously, I've read all the chapters that are currently out and there is literally no deviation from canon whatsoever. Just some added conversations here and there but except for that everything went the same. The power gathering process is also quite BS but I won't say anything about it. Apart from that, the author seems to be getting most of his information about power levels from the VS Battle Wiki which is quite bad, their tiering and criteria makes no sense at all and except for maybe accurate information regarding powers in some cases, that site can not be trusted most of the time. The story basically just goes, he practiced, gained this power and then repeats with canon events taking place. Character Design: 2 Stars. Firstly the MC, he's Kiba ig but it doesn't really matter. The character is to be honest, quite bland and shows no notable qualities or characteristics. That would get a higher rating but then there's also all the cringy stuff he says, I mean he shouts attack and power names. As for the other character well they feel very changed to me and not believable at all but then again, there's literally been a few paragraphs of talking between them so meh ig. His relationships make no sense at all either. World Background: 3 Stars. Normally I always gives fanfics five stars in this department since they're well, fanfics. But this time the rating is lowered, the author isn't scaling them rightly at all and there is a severe lack of information from what I can see. I'm talking about the DMC stuff for the most part so don't pay much mind to it. ----------- Overall: Well umm, I don't know what to say. Keep going and try to improve author and you definitely will. I'm not hating on anything just giving an honest review, hopefully you can improve on these points. For the readers, give it a try if you're bored. I won't tell you to not read it.

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Like this story man kiba is strong and he cool training koneko and Issei is awesome. Make him train koneko and xenovia touki and haki make them stronger

loveing the story so far don't drop don't drop don't drop \(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥\(-ㅂ-)/ ♥ ♥ ♥

Where did you mobe this fanfiction to? Please tell me so i can read it again and rate it thus time. This was a good fic. I want to read it again and read more of the story

Story is good Kiba is my favourite character. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop. Please don't drop.

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I'm waiting for more. I am quite satisfied for now. Even though you used some sketchy site in some of your power levelings. In the future, I am hoping to see more developments and actions that are not one sided beat ups. EX..MC Soloing the Universe too early or suddenly and outsider being suddenly beats the living health out of him.