Review Detail of SpringAnnoyance in 10 Yuan Challenge

I'm the translator, reviewing the story. Some parts sorta meh. Cliche stuff happens. Meh. Sometimes the author does not know anything about the things he/she (dunno) is writing... But it is funny sometimes. Like 0.99% of the time. Stability in the update... For the author is okay, not for me. I am lazy as -----. Character Design? Normal. I'll try to make him have more of a personality. Background? CHINA. Quality in writing, I can read Chinese sorta so I'd just say it is okay. Not too bad but not too great. The writer does not use much imagery sadly... I like imagery.