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This novel has a lot of promise. The world-building is fantastic, with three political factions at play. If the author continues to develop this well, we'll have a future epic fantasy novel on our hands! The concept of vampires, werewolves, and humans has been done before but what makes this novel stand out is the complexity with which the author portrays this traditional setting. There are a lot of original concepts here that I can't wait for the author to develop. The other part of this novel that I really enjoyed was the interactions between the characters. Our FL is a youthful, vibrant girl that has a unique personality. She isn't perfect. On the contrary, the story starts out with her making a mistake. But as a result, this creates a sense of the inevitable and really pushes the plot forward. I love how everything began and how the fast pace of the action led to her fated meeting with the ML (or at least, I'm presuming that he's the ML <3). They dynamic between them is exciting and I can't wait to see how the tension develops! If I had to mention one thing for improvement, it would be the occasional grammar mistake. But it is evident in the later chapters that the author has made incredible effort to improve on this! Definitely, this is a small issue and does not hinder the novel from being very enjoyable. Please keep up the good work, author! I would thoroughly recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys an exciting fantasy romance and I foresee a lot of romantic entanglement to come!

Blessed with the Moon

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Thank you very much for this detailed review and for pointing out where to improve.