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the_goat_4880Lv13yr
2021-11-07 19:21

When first getting into the story, there are some immediate errors that present themselves, in chapter 1 in the forth paragraph "Slight crackling of twigs somewhere far deep in the forest caught his attention" Does not make sense, and could be rewritten as "The slight crackling." Slight errors like this as well as obvious improvements to word choice and gramatic errors are abundant in the novel. I recommend you proofread and edit all the chapters you have released and proofread especially more on unreleased chapters. Other than that I like the way you add a lot of expression into the dialogue, as many stories fail in this department , the actual interactions are ok, I'm not super impressed. The thoughts and development of the emotions and feelings between the characters are pretty well done, overall the story is pretty good, areas of improvement (without changing the story) would be in word choice, pacing and fixing the abundant errors. I hope you will not be angry with this realistic review even if it isn't 5 stars, as I know I would appreciate something like this.

Falling for a Ferocious Beast

CREATIVE_SPACE
4.9
215 Chs

Disukai oleh 1 orang

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CREATIVE_SPACE
CREATIVE_SPACEPenulis

Thanks for taking time to read. I appreciate it and will try to rectify the mistakes you have pointed out.

3yr
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