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Ulvr_Laoch
Ulvr_LaochLv151yr
2023-01-02 07:26

besides poor grammar and sentence structure, everything else is brilliant.

Hadrian Peverell in TVD

Just_for_fun1997
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32 Chs

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Z1op
Z1opLv12

Besides any real plot, charcter development, story format/structure, proper syntax, and diction this story isn’t half bad.

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Wilder6
Wilder6Lv15

Thank you so much for making this, I’ve never seen a Merlin fanfic before when it is one of my favorite shows. So thank you again for writing this and please don’t dope, I only hope there can be more frequent updates. I think this has potential to be something great so keep it up!

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Lackada1sical
Lackada1sicalLv4

Initial Evaluation: Average Tons of grammatical errors which greatly affects the story development. I highly recommend utilizing grammarly as it will not only correct some of your mistakes but it may also help you improving your English vocabulary. The story itself has Potential but it is too long winded, I suggest making decisive changes such as direct approach and enough foundational building for both the MC & story.

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Sleeping_dragon26
Sleeping_dragon26Lv14

Best story

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GirakoST
GirakoSTLv2

Dropped?...

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Cody_Mohr
Cody_MohrLv4

I look forward to the continuation of the story for it has many twists and turns so I hope it continues

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