Review Detail of DaoistfsfYhQ in Pokemon: - The Journey of a Reincarnator

Where do I start… the novel itself is not so bad as to be unreadable for all readers, but it does have several shortcomings: - Giving advantage of 3 wishes is not so bad, but only if this one had its own dream. The premise of his admiration and forced rivalry with Ash and I even dare to say he wants to be Ash 2.0 is in bad taste (You give him extraordinary advantages just to compete with a 10-year-old boy and this is just a normal person, honestly it gives a lot to want). - The character has lived 25 years in his previous life, but his sense of justice questions his metal maturity a lot, especially with those abilities that you have given him, one would expect him to gain greater security and cognitive intelligence, but you only get an insecure character (So for to give them those abilities if he is going to be the same as before he reincarnated). - I don't know why it's becoming a trend, the prototype of characters from Chinese novels in all the fan fiction I see. But please all men are enemies and women are maidens who fall in love easily(Really?)… On top of a Pokémon story where most of the content is white and at most gray in the original, you practically misconfigured all the characters from Pokémon, and that will be annoying for any anime fan, Ash a young master of nothing and Prof. Oak an evil master of a sect… you practically reset the characters and the only thing they have in common with the canon is only the name . - Forced plots… Until now I can't understand how the protagonist doesn't suspect anything that Prof. Oak was not what he seems (It would be justifiable if he was just an ordinary 11-year-old boy, but he is not like 36 years of mental age and above he has the 3 wishes that makes him OP), I mean his skills are for decoration? Prof. Oak gave him Zerora… But what if he was evil? Why just act when this trip is going? I see a plot armor, just to highlight the protagonist in the eventual crisis that will occur at some point. - Unique and legendary Pokémon... this wouldn't be a problem if your fan fiction was just a wish fulfillment, but this one follows Ash (Wouldn't it have been better to just give him an Eve or some common Pokémon?), legendary and unique are for a reason unique, right?... but here they lose all their value, and seem at most rare pokémon. - Crossover… I don't know what a "Classroom of the Elite" character does, and even if you put it in you may have added in the Crimson City School as a mini arc for your fan fiction, and if you plan to add a character from any other anime to the less take the trouble to put a suitable place that characterizes your anime. Having the following is personal: - It feels strange to give a Japanese approach to your character, why not make it an American, European or some citizenship where you feel familiar, because let's be honest I doubt very much that you are Japanese, and therefore you don't have his peculiar way of thinking at the moment to make their characters. - Tag R-18 and Harem at the age of 11 feels weird, and even when you say they mature faster. - The pace is too fast (many things at once, too little to understand the background of why things). My final conclusion that for a true anime fan I do not recommend reading it, if you just want to pass the time and you like fan fiction (Chinese approach) of OP characters and with drama (which I personally do not like) this is for you. Author I'm sorry to say I can't read this anymore, at least not how things developed, there were times I wanted to get out, but I wanted to give it a try, to see if there was a hint of change. Personally, I can rate your fan fiction with 3 stars at most, I hope that one day you make a good fan fiction that is more mature than this one, without much more goodbye.