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Lucky_Cat771
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Yes I will give 5 stars so this is my advice he lacks interaction with other people, there is no detailed explanation of what happened, and it's too fast but overall for the character it's good

In MHA With Haki

TypicallyMixed

Disukai oleh 2 orang

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TypicallyMixed
TypicallyMixedPenulisTypicallyMixed

could you be a little more specific about the "detailed explanation" part. Are you talking about her death or?

Lucky_Cat771
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death, movement during combat, pain, feelings, conversation, it feels a little unreal if you read it it feels like you're just reading unimportant words less memorable, easy to forget. (If you don't understand that's okay too, it's just my opinion, the point is like reading a summary of a story) if it bothers you then I'm sorry

TypicallyMixed:could you be a little more specific about the "detailed explanation" part. Are you talking about her death or?
Lucky_Cat771
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Also why is Yamato acting like he hates everyone

TypicallyMixed
TypicallyMixedPenulisTypicallyMixed

yeah, I get you. I'll work on it for the fight scenes in the sports festival. hopefully it will be more detailed going forward. Thanks for pointing that out.

Lucky_Cat771:death, movement during combat, pain, feelings, conversation, it feels a little unreal if you read it it feels like you're just reading unimportant words less memorable, easy to forget. (If you don't understand that's okay too, it's just my opinion, the point is like reading a summary of a story) if it bothers you then I'm sorry
TypicallyMixed
TypicallyMixedPenulisTypicallyMixed

Lol I wouldn't say hate. It's more like a combination between her not caring about them and wanting to have fun.

Lucky_Cat771:Also why is Yamato acting like he hates everyone