Review Detail of Shanique_Mahbeir_3863 in Bachelor's wing

The concept is one that I would be interested in. However, the writing quality needs a little work. I see the common mistake of not identifying switching POVs and a little confusion in the first person vs third person as well. If these issues are corrected, I believe that this novel will be even better. The author has a clear goal in mind and I have no doubts that this novel could be something great. Best Wishes.