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Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv142yr
2021-12-09 15:45

did you really have to make the main character a man sl*t and man wh*re. any person who likes that stuff is a man wh*re and man wh*res are parasite and you know what ppl usually do to those right. you should drop or rewrite the main character And ps yes I just called all the sl*ts who like this novel a man wh*re

Disukai oleh 6 orang

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Balasan11
Malthemute
MalthemuteLv15

k

Tofu_eating_Cat
Tofu_eating_CatLv15

Awww, haven't read such a clear cut green monster review in a long while. Nothing about grammar, story, plot or world building. [img=recommend]Just an attack to a genre and hook.

Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv14

yup I'm really biased about man wh*res to the point if I'd ever met one I'd out right k*ll them that's how disgusted I feel about it thanks

Tofu_eating_Cat:Awww, haven't read such a clear cut green monster review in a long while. Nothing about grammar, story, plot or world building. [img=recommend]Just an attack to a genre and hook.
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Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

You’re evidently a virgin

Raven_Master:yup I'm really biased about man wh*res to the point if I'd ever met one I'd out right k*ll them that's how disgusted I feel about it thanks
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Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv14

ha I wish that was true, I really do

Fellbane:You’re evidently a virgin
Fellbane
FellbaneLv11

I hope it’s true, I really do. Someone like you shouldn’t be allowed to breed.

Raven_Master:ha I wish that was true, I really do
Objectively_Wrong
Objectively_WrongLv4

You’ve basically offended 95% of everyone on WN. Congratulations.

Objectively_Wrong
Objectively_WrongLv4

Look man, your right hand is not considered a woman. Please.

Raven_Master:ha I wish that was true, I really do
Deadrule_vivek
Deadrule_vivekLv5

were you hurt by that kind of man irl? i am sensing some deep trauma with a tinge of PTSD here

Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv14

nope, just annoyed

Deadrule_vivek:were you hurt by that kind of man irl? i am sensing some deep trauma with a tinge of PTSD here
Jadyn_Knowles
Jadyn_KnowlesLv1

But your mother is.

Objectively_Wrong:Look man, your right hand is not considered a woman. Please.
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chuchutrain
chuchutrainLv14
kolarthecool
kolarthecoolLv14

Wow, one of the better novels in all of WN most recent picks. It's a 'Transmigrated with a System' story but the focus on the system is very minor, so far I think there's been less than 200 words regarding the system. The type of system is also one that's entirely hands off, allowing the MC to actually have a life and further the plot without referring to it every three paragraphs. As for the MC, we finally get an intelligent, down to earth character that actually thinks before he acts rather than arrogantly throwing his ill-gotten power around and stomping on everyone. The MC plays the part of a wastrel third son of the powerful prime minister but does it in such a way that the readers dont just hate his guts and want to punch him in the face. As for the side characters, they actually show some depth and ambiguity. His father is intelligent, highly capable and kind hearted, but he purposefully fosters an image as a cold hearted and greedy official so as to not threaten the emperor and bring trouble on his clan. So much different than those of similar stories that will already be planning rebellion within the first 5 chapters rather than just moderating their actions. The Emperor is appropriately mysterious, being more than the arrogant, almighty figure we see in these novels. Even 39 chapters in I still cant say how much he knows, or how he really feels towards the MC and his dad. The female lead isnt the Mary Sue type I was expecting either. Yes she's a talented Martial artist and a competent general despite her young age, but those can all be expected given that her father is a great general and raised her in that manner. Despite this, she also shows some flaws and a believable lack of competence when she tries to deal with the city guard the same way as with soldiers on the battlefield. Also rather than the author dancing around the issue and having both her and the MC be ignorant of the others feelings, they both quickly realize that neither want to marry the other and actually talk things out before agreeing to somewhat work together on the matter. All in all, these first 39 chapters have been beyond excellent and I hope it keeps that way after the story is picked up.

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