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Item: Captured by the game
Rating: 3.6

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It is a short good read. Capitalize names, small errors here and there but nothing too major. Anyway, the characters of Kade, Joshua, and Landa were very compelling. It gave me "Jumanji" and "Narnia" vibes. Keep updating. (I was expecting a chapter 3, though.)

Captured by the game

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thank you . i am going to write chapter three soon. thanks for the review

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