I don’t understand where this fanfic gets such ratings from, the ability is interesting, the story is weak. The unknown things in the first 10 chapters completely discourage the desire to read further, because it seems that they take me for an idiot who is forced to believe what is happening there, and that everything gets away with mс
ZeOwl
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SUKAThere was bound to be plot holes early on. I was a new writer at the time and didn't have much skill or forethought. I believe the story will get better in time, but I prefer to leave the beginning as is for the sake of my own progress. I write this for my own personal entertainment so if you didn't enjoy it. All is fair, i just want it to be clear, I'm not the best writer and the beginning of this fic is a testament to that. Hopefully I will get better with time. Maybe one of my other fics will be better for you, I don't know though its up to you to read them
will you update your avatar fic soon because you said once this got to 80 or do chapters you will update your avatar fic
ZeOwl:There was bound to be plot holes early on. I was a new writer at the time and didn't have much skill or forethought. I believe the story will get better in time, but I prefer to leave the beginning as is for the sake of my own progress. I write this for my own personal entertainment so if you didn't enjoy it. All is fair, i just want it to be clear, I'm not the best writer and the beginning of this fic is a testament to that. Hopefully I will get better with time. Maybe one of my other fics will be better for you, I don't know though its up to you to read them