Review Detail of Haroon_Arfan in Easy Life not so Easy

Well, what rating did you expect the author to give to his own novel? But still, I did put my best effort in. This is my first work so do expect some mistakes newbies make and I am open to any suggestions you can make in the comments. I am writing this in my free time so there can be some delays in uploads depending on the free time I get. And yea this shameless author will change his review in future as this is just to get out of the 'no rating zone'.