I don’t even know where to begin with how bad this is. The chapters are super super short, the grammar is terrible but the execution is the worst. Chakra of the 10 tails at 5? Shadow clones without being taught by anyone at 5? Teaching a five year old the chakra techniques necessary for Rasengan as a way to learn at 5? I am sorry I got super excited by the title and thought this could be a really cool story but yeesh its terrible.
jayden_darkside
Disukai oleh 4 orang
SUKAlook dude I write for fun and I like my book I don't care if you don't like it i simply I write because I'm bored so please go read something don't make hate comment like this just say this is bad a move on .
Lag_Overloaded:I think the god has put that kid under genjutsu 😂😂😂
Well thats upsetting would it hurt for a really good Naruto fan fic to be released? They are few and very f****g far between
Ezukejyll:Dude there has been 2 other novels titled the same way back in the day and within 2-3 chapters you could tell how bad it was going to be. Reading this title and knowing from experience just how bad it was with the other two did not dissuade my opinion on ever reading this.
Ezukejyll:Dude there has been 2 other novels titled the same way back in the day and within 2-3 chapters you could tell how bad it was going to be. Reading this title and knowing from experience just how bad it was with the other two did not dissuade my opinion on ever reading this.
jayden_darkside:dude I write for fun and if you don't like it read something else I care 0
Ezukejyll:No problem. Went and found more to read. Good luck on your story though.