Review Detail of 256glam in dear princess

The story is quite original."Mommy mommy" Lavinte kept screaming but no response came. The place kept becoming darker and closed in on her. She decided to give up crying.  She cleaned away her tears and started doing the only thing that could ease her pain.        Her head ached so bad throat was dry her eyes were swollen and her hair looked like an incomplete nest. No one would recognize the ever beautiful princess of Keller in her present state.     Lavinte kept humming to herself but her head didn't stop hurting and her throat was also becoming another problem. But she couldn't complain because she had brought it upon herself that evening when she sneaked out to meet her prince charming. Thinking about him took away all her pain and replaced it with worry.      "Is he thinking about me"       "Did he notice am missing" "Will he even look for me" And then it hit her that no one else was aware of her departure from the palace apart from her prince charming. "Prince Willan" is what she liked to call him Every girl's dream boyfriend rather husband. His dark hair made it hard not to notice him the moment he entered the room. Everything about him was extremely intimidating hence leaving him no competitors And his eyes. Those green globes was like a magnet fishing for all the attention.      She had done ✅ everything to gain his attention and today he had finally left her a note to meet him in a stable which belonged to one of the councillors. But the moment she had reached their a veil fell on her eyes robbing her of her sight . Thinking 🤔 back she learnt how stupid she was in reality. Instead of screaming for help she had calmly cooperated with the person thinking it was part of Willan's plan to surprise her.               *_***     In truth Willan was not a prince,but he had an aura of one and everyone called him prince. He had come into the palace as part of the entrouge accompanying the new Queen of Keller. The king of Keller had lost his queen the year before and as he had no son yet , he owed it to the kingdom to remarry.         Mellina was the name of the new chosen Queen who was decided upon by the council of elders to be the new Queen because of her delicate beauty.      Mellina ,a very cunning young woman and everyone was wondering why she agreed to marry a man half her age. But the answer was simple. He is the king.  Despite the cunningness her beauty and we'll thought of speech made her very likeable to everyone.                       ++++ Back to Lavinte.         A light started coming closer but she couldn't here any footsteps but she felt a certain familiarity with whoever was coming. The light came close closer and closer and then it disappeared like it was never there.       It was just as they said just when you hope the most your soul shatters. Tears started wetting her dress and she had no control over it. She hugged her knees and let the years flow.     It was just like the morning of her mother's death. She felt so hopeless . "Did my father even notice am missing."she wondered because he was always busy with something but being the king she couldn't blame him        While she hugged her knees she heard a small sound but having lost hope she didn't even raise her head .        Crack.crack then boom .