Review Detail of Gabriel_Cabral in Pokemon: The New World
Ulasan detail
this story was going great but it was just the author wanting to give legendary pokemon to a fellow MC who screwed it up for me, man, who is the MC of your story? when you need to give a legendary Pokémon to a friend of the passing MC, it's not a problem for the MC to waste his time chasing a dragon type for his friend, but the author to top it off still gives him a legendary! Legendary Pokémon are pure incarnations of the power of nature, here comes the author giving them to a passerby like cabbage. that's just my opinion, good luck with the story, but i'm giving up
Pokemon: The New World
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SUKABalasan3
I am sorry to hear that a certain aspect of the story spoiled it for you to such a degree. I have received a number of comments on how giving away the Articuno to a person other than the MC was not a correct move. However, that can't be changed and as a result I am truly very sorry for spoiling the story for you. Thank you for your review nonetheless and thank you for taking the time out to read the book.
this story was very good in the beginning, even think that it could reach the ranking, but the part of the MC going out of his way to help his colleague was very different in his personality, because until the beginning he was always rational and showed more emotions just with his pokemons and those he had more interaction with, but the author, the MC had no memory with this colleague, he didn't even have time to socialize, then the author makes an arc in which the MC goes out of his way to get a Dragon type to he and still has a legendary at the end that this fellow wins, very unnecessary, apart from the death of the articuno mother, it was only the MC capturing her instead of letting her die in the explosion, if the MC can catch the articuno galarian to do it it suffered and the MC's colleague got the articuno son, why didn't the MC take the mother, because if legends are made, it's easy to get that even the MC's colleague did it, so I would have to prevent the death of the articuno mother, that's why I thought it was not necessary the dramas and other nonsense in this arc, if thea author to rewrite this arc, it could be one of the best in the book.