Review Detail of KingDovahkiin in HP: A Legend Begins

Author here, I would like to thank everyone who has been supporting me in the writing of my fanfic, where I try to put stories that I think would be good in a different storyline. And about my first chapters that I've been seeing that there are a lot of people asking me to improve them, I will do that, but for now I don't have time, because my life is busy, but I will edit the beginning, to make it clearer and also to have a better intonation for reading, thanks for the support.