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- Writing quality: I've got no problem with it; the grammar is good, and it isn't only an enormous paragraph, so it's pretty easy to read. Although the 'foreshadowing' is a turn-off, I understand that it is the way the author writes. - Updating stability: No problem here as the author release quite a lot of chapters rapidly. - Story development: An interesting take of the MHA world with Madara's power. I'm only slightly sad that the author didn't go more into the uses of chakra as we didn't see big jutsus to show off, haha, and we have only seen about two fire ninjutsu, Chidori, Rasengan and susano. The others are told about but not shown, which I find a pity. - Character design: The MC, his girlfriends and his parents are 'developed slightly more than others as others are almost not mentioned except for a few lines. - World Background Well, it's a multiverse story, and he's currently in the MHA world, so there's not much background to write on as we almost all know about MHA if we read this. Finally, thanks for the chapters. I love reading it. As for the character and the jutsus, well, it's only my preference, but I also understand that it is useless to spend time writing on characters who will not be mentioned again the moment he leaves that world. For jutsus well, it will depend on his strength in the future. Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep up the great work!

Soaring through Omniverse

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Thank you! Will try to meet your expectations