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The writing quality is really trash. Author is trying too hard to insert comedic punchlines after every sentence. Also, the premise of story is problematic. Mc gets a system through which he can revive. But there is never proper analysis on limits of system abilities, how much can he revive etc. One time he is reviving hours ago, and another time, he is reviving seconds ago, that he can't even avoid a truck accident because of limited time. Basically the story is also too forced because of that system.

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