Review Detail of empressblackrose09 in I Reincarnated in a Fantasy World And Now I Have To Marry Four Girls

It's really a super-duper fast pace for me. The first chapter feels like you are jumping from one place to another and also the conversation seems a bit off. I don't know if it's in first person pov or third person pov. Some grammar and stuff are not in right place. Punctuations and everything. This novel has potential if the author could fix much. Just keep writing! ^_^ P.S. I'll put this on the lib to read it further in my free time.