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Rating: 3

Mirio_kunLv13yr

2021-08-06 12:45

The moment he was born as a child and his mom was dead his first thought was helping Naruto. And because he is Gaara he felt regret that he won't be able to help Naruto. Also the fact the it felt more like he is playing game not living. Same with the fact that the first thought should have been about how he will live. So, I am sorry i couldn't tolerate the MC anymore. I hope you luck.

please reset the booktitle Kiki2buns 20231218092329 77

Kiki2buns

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Kiki2bunsAuthor

Finally an honest review, I'm not a good author so that's basically why it feels like he's playing a game instead of living, and for the helping Naruto thing, it was just a thought as a huge fan of the original series.

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Master_of_LoliLv5

bro. Naruto already broken HAX chara without being helped and you want to help him. Come on dude your Mc just gonna a side chara if you help naruto and not a real Mc

Kiki2buns:Finally an honest review, I'm not a good author so that's basically why it feels like he's playing a game instead of living, and for the helping Naruto thing, it was just a thought as a huge fan of the original series.

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