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Review Detail of Cyclxne in Shadows Alpha 2089

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Cyclxne
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Great world background and characters, but the writing quality could use some work. Too many commas in some sentences and too few in others. There are grammatical mistakes but nothing to be worried over; the story is still perfectly understandable. Keep it up, author!

Shadows Alpha 2089

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Thank you. I'm trying to improve my writing :)