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Review Detail of Ciberdrone in The Journey Starts From Dragon Ball

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Ciberdrone
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Soo, guys this fan-fic is really good in my opinion and I believe you will agree with me. I will just write the worlds our MC will visit in case you are curious. They are: Dragon Ball ( includes GT and Super), High School of the Dead, Naruto, Battle Through The Heavens, The Legend of Qin, Sekirei, One Piece, League Of Legends (Chinese cartoon version), Sword Art Online, Douluo Dalu, Fairy Tail, Bleach, Rosario Vampire, Akame Ga Kill, Date A Live, Attack On Titan, High school DXD, Xia Lan, Heaven's Lost Property, Food Wars, The Outcast, OVERLORD. These are those I remember.

The Journey Starts From Dragon Ball

Ciberdrone

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Balasan4

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i really hope u don't drop this

mihaita98
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if only instead of simple translation you would have rewrote it, it would be better what i hate about this book, is that there are a lot of strange chineze expressions that make no sense at all to me, even if i read a lot of xianxia novels and comics. please rewrite the story with neutral/english way of saying so to say, as it make me lost

Ciberdrone
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I'll try to do that! If there is something unclear, just write it and I'll try to make it as clear as possible. I have already changed the racism expressed in the first few chapters. As you may know, most Chinese novels contain at least a few sentences about Japanese where they show their hatred towards them. This has something to do with history and Chinese readers gladly accept that content. Other readers, instead, don't like seeing this kind of thing. That's why I deleted/changed those parts.

mihaita98:if only instead of simple translation you would have rewrote it, it would be better what i hate about this book, is that there are a lot of strange chineze expressions that make no sense at all to me, even if i read a lot of xianxia novels and comics. please rewrite the story with neutral/english way of saying so to say, as it make me lost
Jack_Ryu
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I have red its other version on MTL Novel and I have liked it. I do not know if you are gonna reword the entire thing, for the author of the one I am reading stopped his and like the other guy, please reword alot of the Chinese worlds because it is really difficult to understand them.