A great read indeed. I liked the cover. It's simple yet very eye catching. The story's pace is good for now. I don't think it's rushing or have a slow pace. I saw some tenses off the bats here and there. As for grammar I didn't find any errors for now (maybe a few). Overall, a nice read.
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