Review Detail of MagnanimousMaestro in Order c.c.

Item: Order c.c.
Rating: 4.8

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MagnanimousMaestroLv12yrMagnanimousMaestro

overall, the concept is amazing, the world building the character development, they are all high points of the story, I'll give you three tips, 1 is the make sure the sentences aren't too long, spellcheck and update more, other than that, this is a pretty solid book

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KingCristo

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Thank you so much for your review. It means very much to me. I appreciate the criticism as well, I know I have so much room for improvement so I appreciate all the feedback I can get Brethren!

2yr

MagnanimousMaestroLv1MagnanimousMaestro

no problem my comrade

KingCristo:Thank you so much for your review. It means very much to me. I appreciate the criticism as well, I know I have so much room for improvement so I appreciate all the feedback I can get Brethren!

2yr