OK, here's an honest review. I really like jumpchain fanfics, this one isn't bad but it's more like a summary of events than a real story. I don't think any characters have had 10 lines so far, including mc. We don't even have dialogues between the mc and his girlfriends
5inco
Disukai oleh 7 orang
SUKAStill, it's your choice to write a story like that. I personally would prefer you to do as the author of Wish Fulfillment System, which only releases two or three chapters a week but all quality. But I won't be complaining or bothering you about something like that, after all you're writing for free. But I'm also not going to give 5 stars to a story just because it's free too.
5inco:Well, suum cuique, my friend. I'm mainly writing this to test how I fare at writing English stories, so I can't really invest that much time with it :D