Review Detail of novelguru143 in Demon King In Marvel
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The MC is aimless and doesn't know what to do next it always revolves around plot no character development.
Demon King In Marvel
The_Lazy_Panda
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novelguru143Lv14novelguru143
it's not to offend you. it's my opinion.it is good for a new writer but kinda mid so I dropped it ,don't be discouraged and improve upon it...
The_Lazy_Panda:aimless?
novelguru143Lv14novelguru143
it's because the MC has no reason to grow strong because he is already strong.and doesn't need anything like Lucifer morningstar from the show.
The_Lazy_Panda:aimless?
whyudothat_Lv4whyudothat_
novelguru143:it's because the MC has no reason to grow strong because he is already strong.and doesn't need anything like Lucifer morningstar from the show.
Phaze_MorningStar2Lv4Phaze_MorningStar2
novelguru143:it's not to offend you. it's my opinion.it is good for a new writer but kinda mid so I dropped it ,don't be discouraged and improve upon it...
Darwin111111Lv4Darwin111111
XD. But in the end. You have to read the credits that nobody cares about but the guy who might sue you. I literally didn't see it until I read this and went to check it out. But if it's translated... I'm going to be generic, say it's Chinese, and get out of here.
Own: / (This is a Translation Work ) 美漫地狱之主 Literally in the description