Review Detail of Red_Flame_Spectre in Mage's Fate [Discontinued]

So far, I've read until chap. 11 and now I'm already excited. I think its doing good, especially on the fight scenes which are very detailed. Honestly, the mc's actions/moves remind of Naruto characters. The mc's actions in chap. 3 are realistic and still normal, but in chap. 11, I imagined something really cool. The descriptions and narrations are very detailed. Also, the world of the story is probably well-thought, with things like 'thousands of years history,' 'mysterious places,' 'strange creatures,' and 'magic system and magical science' which i appreciate. But I don't understand the 'magic system' fully yet, probably because it's intended by the author while looking at the mc's situation. As for the author's writing quality, I can't assess very much (because I'm more observant to the story plots) but all I can say is 'it can still improve.'