Review Detail of YamasakiMitsuo in Within the Grasp

shameless author giving review for himself lol. hello guys! this is my 1st time writing a fantasy story. and also being a writer. I'd love to if you guys giving a review/comment abt my work to give me inspiration to continue this. Im trying my best to not have an op system in this story. Also, I gonna loweer the romance and just full of adventure. thankyou ♡