overall its good but there is a problem the numbers!! its so annoying what are you making is a novel not a bibble with chapters! sad but will drop.
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Disukai oleh 2 orang
SUKAHi! Thanks for reading, i appreciated your review and i got what you mean by the numbers, i purposedly did it to make it easier to read, ah well some will think it's annoying, i actually just focus on the story and make others easy, sorry for the numbers hope you be back and try to read my story again! thanks again!