This is actually very good the writeing quality is amazing and You take time to show your charecters motivations and you also make these motivations the driveing force for the charecter in some famfics the charecter just does something without any motivations. you do well with this and actually hive your charecter real personality. i also like how you use different povs you dont overuse them you use them to bring to light certain story elements and guve attention to certain things instead of useing them for the sake of having a diffrent pesective.
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