Review Detail of kathleenneko in ENVISAGE

Nice story Author! I'm not into MMORPG games or the similar kind of games, but, as a fan of Fantasy and Sci-fi genres I love this story! I love the concept and the Author definitely got a creative and imaginative mind for the Author to be able to put into words what was the world of this story looks like. The synopsis was on point and it could catch your curiosity as you read it, the way that the author narrates the story was very well written, although a few editing for capitalization and punctuation here and there is needed other than that there nothing more for me to say. Good job Author! I can't wait to read the next chapter.