Review Detail of midnight_bloom in Wonder-World

Item: Wonder-World
Rating: 4.2

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Your story is cool. It has great potential. I would suggest to enrich the world-building some more maybe? And maybe the character design as well. Keep on writing author. 🤗

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MrWritter

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Yes, I will be sure to enrich those points, thanks for the review.

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