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Millions of years time skip after 20chaps of “character development”. Why even bother with the 20chaps? Just start with the chat group! It leaves a bad taste when you built up relationships in the beginning only to have a contrived MILLIONS of years hibernation time skip where those people the MC built any relationship with are already getting on with their own lives. Terrible start to the story and quite a waste of time and energy to read because the author trashes his own character development with contrived plot. Any expectations I had into reading an interesting story went down the drain because the author doesnt seem to respect his/her own work.

A certain God's Chat Group

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