Review Detail of Stannis in Fuck! I'm Hinata Hyuga!

I read the first chapter and I did not like it, the idea is good, I like what you think of naruto and original hinata but the plot is not well written. It cannot be that hinata kills the ninja jounin at 3 years old, with that I already know that you are not going to put the protagonist in problems or dramas, the story will be hinata being perfect.