Its alright to have typos or bad grammar. However, this fanfic is unreadable. Quite literally I spent three-fourths of my time rereading and even then every 5th paragraph or so just made no sense whatsoever.
Tuyomi
Disukai oleh 13 orang
SUKAif the upload stability, the plot and everything else except quality is ok, the result can very well be 3.5 stars while being unreadable
SuperN00b:unreadable but still 3.5 star ? really