Review Detail of WetAppleDream in Life in Shinobi World (Naruto Fan-Fic)

good idea for naruto fanfic or should i say hyuuga fanfic? interesting! although ssome slight mispellings and punctuations could be corrected by using grammarly *not advertising ok*, It doesnt cause readers to be distracted. Overall good, i hope author can create original hyuuga justu. thank you!