Review Detail of ONGFRFR in What's Mine Is Mine

i like it this is a new take on this type of fanfic, i dont see any good OC fanfics that are more than 5 chapters. and if i do its more about momonga and not about the OC, so i hope you dont drop this half way or if you do at least make a ending even if you have to make a 100 year timeskip as the ending.